基本上 這種同人文都有種弊病 最後會流於道具的使用還有技巧上的組合來掩飾沒有其他東西可以寫 基本上BL會吸引腐女有兩個重點 一個是難以碰觸的禁忌之愛 另外就是男男之間欲拒還迎的那種矛盾的調情 那才是最刺激的
- Apr 03 Sun 2011 19:28
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- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:19
Epilogue – Another day
At the moment, the bell of the church rang when the clock showed now is six o’clock. Ken held her hand up, said, ‘want to watch the sun rise?’ Eva nodded.
They leave the church and stood in front of the church, the sun was just started to rise. Darkness was driven away, and the brightness came that the sky was coloured.
They became hopeful again. Ken looked at Eva and praised, ‘this is another day.’ ‘Yes, a brand new day. ’ Eva looked at Ken a while, and then answered.
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:19
Chapter five– The truth
‘We have already chatted too long, sir,’ Eva yawned. ‘Oh… Let me see what time it is…’ Ken said with looking for the clock. The hour hand of the clock was pointing in the number five and the minute hand was number six. ‘Well, now is half past five, the sunrise of Christmas day is coming,’ Ken said.
‘Although we have talked all the night, I still know you too less.’ Eva said with full of question marks, ‘why do you come here, sir?’ ‘Your memory is really bad, my little Evita,’ Ken said. ‘Eh? Why… why do you know…?’ Eva blurted out. She really seemed that she heard something shocking.
‘That is your original name right? I remembered your tone was full of angular, which is the thing you still remain unchanged,’ Ken laughed. Eva looked Ken carefully, and then shouted suddenly, ‘I remember you! You are Charlotte’s fiancé!’ She stood up and pointing Ken that cannot speak anything.
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:18
Chapter four – Indifferent cosmos
‘Gift? You believe gods exist in the world?’ Eva asked amazedly. ‘No, but people believe. There is no miracle, everything is come from our hands, and it can be classified into consequent and accident,’ Ken explained.
‘Have you faced any problem which is impossible to tackle?’ Ken asked. ‘Who have a life is full of favourable winds in their sails?’ Eva replied ironically, and thought his question was superfluous.
‘No pain, lives are not completed.’ Ken ignored her jeer, and answer, ‘if gods are real, maybe they are just watching a film, and the earth is just a farm. How can grasses require anything from the master?’
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:18
Chapter three – Fragile friendship
‘Not only family, friendship is also unnecessary for me,’ Eva did not answered directly, ‘friendship is full of conspiracy, which is just a business. They come because of benefit and go because it becomes invaluable.’
‘There is no doubt that people’s actions are based on their wants. Their wants, however, are not only rights and wealth, Eva. No pay no gain, my dear. In spite of good friends, they have to maintain their friendship hard. Humans eager are loved. And one of the important components in human being is trust.’ Ken said.
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:18
Chapter two – Broken family
‘Do you want to listen to my story?’ Eva cheered herself up, and asked. ‘Of course, kid’ Ken smiled kindly. ‘No kid more, sir…’ Eva looked at Ken helplessly.
‘There was a girl, who lived in a broken family, whether the crack appeared before the girl was born,’ Eva said with a flat tone, as she was telling the story of a stranger, ‘her home was silent all the time, no talking, no laughing, and even no crying… where seemed to be a dead home.’
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:17
Chapter one – Tragedy in love
‘That, take a seat first, do not you want to stand whole night?’ Ken said. ‘No, I do not.’ Eva said when she was sitting down. And then, Ken took another sit opposite Eva, and asked, ‘Did you have your first love?’‘Of course,’ Eva looked at Ken speechlessly, ‘I am a 16-year-old girl,’ she added. ‘Then failed?’ Ken asked. ‘I know you are malicious, man,’ Eva was unpleasant to answer. ‘Take it easy! Successful first love is rare to see.’ Ken said. ‘I do not trust that you took it easy, eyes, sir,’ Eva sneered. ‘Fine, I admit that my acting is very bad. Yet, I want to share a story to you. Do not you want to listen?’ ‘I am all ears, sir,’ Eva said.
‘In the spring, I have seen a couple had a crush on each other, they explained their love under the cherry tree. The boy held her in his arms closely, and told her something sweet as love poems. Love in their eyes is going to overflow, as they cannot love each other anymore,’ Ken said, ‘Do you want to know the poem?’ Eva nodded.
- Mar 20 Sun 2011 13:14
Prologue - Meeting in Church
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Parties and balls had already finished, the lights of houses were being turned off one by one, which made the whole town darker and quieter than before. A pink-dressed girl was walking on the road alone, whose back and the footprints were left down brought loneliness to people.
- Mar 13 Sun 2011 19:49
友情交易
人總是想以最小的化價博取最大的利益
其實這是赤裸裸的交易,只是你還沒看明白而已
想得灰暗一點,其實所謂「真正的」友情也是一種交易。